Dialogue en Anglais

Discussion dans 'La Poub3lle' créé par Ludovic_, 27 Novembre 2006.

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    Ludovic_ Anime > Manga

    Ma petite soeur, qui a des difficultés en anglais a eu la bonne idée de demandé à son frérot de l'aider pour son dialogue, gravicisme erreur de jeunesse qu'elle a commise, mais soit, le dialogue est à faire pour demain, j'ai fais une esquisse mais côté forme et vocabulaire, ce n'est pas top

    Si vous pouviez jeter un coup d'oeil, je vous en serais éternellement reconnaisant
    *Elle est en quatrième secondaire*


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    1.	Hi, Am I well at the hotel American Express?
    Yes, You Are well at the hotel American Express.
    
    2.	Do you have a room with bad room or shower?
    Yes, We Do. Do you want a room for particular or enterprise?
    
    3.	It’s for a business travel for my company.
    Can you spell the name of your company?
    
    4.	S.O.F.T.W.A.R.E, do you want that I repeat?
    No, I don’t, but can I to have your name? Thank you.
    
    5.	Yes, naturally, Aurelie, I’m the secretary of Mister Armstrong.
    Thank you, Can you give me your date of birth?
    
    6.	Yes, of course, it’s the twenty-three of January ninety-eighty (1980)
    Where are you phoning at time (for the moments)? It’s an international call or national call?
    
    7.	I’m phoning from Belgium for the Software Company.
    Do you desire a car at your disposal at your arrival’s time?
    
    8.	Yes, I do, that will help me much for my displacements
    I’m going to reserve a car that will wait at the airport at your arrivals.
    
    9.	It’s nice from your share, Thank you very much.
    What time did you arrive at the airport of London?
    
    10.	I will arrive in the evening of Friday at 19.00
     Ok, a driver will waiting after you on the parking.
    
    11.	Do you have a conference room in the hotel on the place?
    Yes, Sure, How many peoples come at the conference? 
    
    12.	Approximately two hundred peoples will be come at the conference.
    When do you want to reserve this conference room?
    
    13.	The Saturday if it’s possible, thank you.
    Yes, it is free after ten’o clock in the morning.
    
    14.	It’s perfect for me at ten o’clock.
    Is it necessary to cooking a breakfast for the peoples?
    
    15.	Oh yes, if it’s possible but not necessary.
    Do you want an estimate for the room and breakfast?
    
    16.	Yes, I do. I need it to my accountancy.
    Ok, it would be envisage approximately two thousand five hundred and fourty per person.
    
    
    
    17.	What time can I take the breakfast in the room?
    Usually, Will the breakfast served at seven o clock.
    
    	18. Are there others activities in the hotel in the journey? 
    Yes, there are a fitness center, beauty center, swimming and poolbar.
    
    19.	Usually, I wake up at seven o’clock; can you wake me at this time?
    Yes, I can, certainly. We will be made a call in your room.
    
    20.	Is the hotel far from the center of London? 
    No, It’s isn’t. You need ten minutes by car to get there.
    
    21.	It’s possible to do some shopping around the hotel?
    Yes, it is but it’s more interesting to go in the center of London.
    
    22.	Can I dinner in the evening at the hotel on 9pm.
    Yes, you can but you must pay because it’s not comprise in the formulate.
    
    	23. Are there any good restaurants around the hotel, please?
    Yes, there are very good restaurants like Chinese restaurants, Italian or Greeks restaurants.
    
    24.	I intend remain three nights, can you send the invoice to my boss company?
    Yes, I can it too. The total price of your reservation goes up at 486 euros, please.
    
    25.	Thank you for your patience. I hope to pass a nice stay.
    Don’t forget that here we don’t pay in euros but in sterling’s. Goodbye, Thank you.
    
    
    Ludovic_, 27 Novembre 2006
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    Kung JEDI

    Euh? juste une petite remarque : il y a des erreurs de syntaxe.
    Bon et je crois que je suis trop tard car j'aurais pu t'aider: au cas ou je vais te faire quelques-unes des dernières.

    25. Merci de votre patience. J'espère passé un bon séjour.
    N'oublié pas qu'ici on ne paie pas en Euro mais en Sterling. Au revoir. Merci.

    24.J'ai l'intention de rester 3 jour, est-ce que vous pouvez envoyer la facture au patron de ma compagnie.
    Oui je peu le faire aussi. Le prix total de votre réservation s'élève à 486 euros, s'il vous plait.

    23.Est-ce qu'il y a quelque bon restaurant dans les environ de l'hôtel, s'il vous plait?
    Oui, il y en a des très bon restaurants, comme des restaurant Chinoix, Italien ou Grec.
    Kung, 28 Novembre 2006
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    zemicmic SupeR HiRo

    No, I don’t, but can I to have your name?

    can I to have your name ???????


    May I have your name plutot non?? ca me parait bizarre cette syntaxe

    Sauf si le to signifie aussi Too .... mais la syntaxe, me semble pas juste,

    Je dirais plutot : May I also have you name please ?

    Hi, Am I well at the hotel American Express?
    le "well" me gene un peu... mais bon c'est peut etre juste.
    (j'aurais peut-etre dis, is that here the "xxx hotel" ?)


    21. It’s possible to do some shopping around the hotel?

    Is it possible ?
    zemicmic, 28 Novembre 2006
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    ludt Hips hips hurra!

    Il me semble que ton esquisse pour une élève de quatrième année soit d'un trop bon niveau, je ne me souviens pas avoir eu en tout cas un cours aussi avancé.
    Il serait préférable qu'elle essaie d'abord de traduire ce qu'elle peut, ensuite toi de corriger les grosses fautes...
    ludt, 28 Novembre 2006
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    Dark Dream Touriste

    6/ ninety-eighty ---> 9080 :p
    nineteen-eighty

    et

    10/ 19.00 --- > nineteen o'clock, comme t'a mis le reste des heures en lettres
    Dark Dream, 28 Novembre 2006
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    ludt Hips hips hurra!

    1. Hi, is that here the hotel American Express?
    Yes, it is.

    2. Do you have a room with bathroom or shower?
    Yes, We Do. Do you want a room for particular or enterprise?

    3. It’s for a business travel for my company.
    Can you spell the name of your company?

    4. S.O.F.T.W.A.R.E, do you want that I repeat?
    No, I don’t, but can i have your name?

    5. Yes, Aurelie, I’m the secretary of Mister Armstrong.
    Thank you, Can you give me your date of birth?

    6. Yes, of course, it’s the twenty-three of January ninety-eighty (1980)
    Where are you phoning at time (for the moment)? Is it an international call or a national call?

    7. I’m phoning from Belgium for the Software Company.
    Do you desire a car at your disposal at your arrival?

    8. Yes, I do, that will help me much for my displacements
    I’m going to reserve a car that will wait at the airport at your arrival.

    9. Thank you very much.
    When will you arrive at the airport of London ?

    10. I will arrive in the evening of Friday at 19.00
    Ok, a driver will wait you in the parking.

    11. Do you have a conference room in the hotel ?
    Yes, sure, How many people will come at the conference?

    12. Approximately two hundred people.
    When do you want to reserve this conference room?

    13. The Saturday if it’s possible.
    Yes, it is free after ten’o clock in the morning.

    14. It’s perfect for me at ten o’clock.
    Is it necessary to cook a breakfast for the people?

    15. Yes, it will be perfect.
    Do you want an estimation of the price for the room and the breakfast?

    16. Yes, I do. I need it to my accountancy.
    Ok, the total will be approximately two thousand five hundred and fourty per person.



    17. When can I take the breakfast in the room?
    Usually, the breakfast is served at seven o clock.

    18. Are there other activities in the hotel in the journey?
    Yes, there is a lot of activities such as a fitness center, a beauty center, a swimming pool and a bar.

    19. Usually, I wake up at seven o’clock; can you wake me at this time?
    Yes, no problem. We will call you at seven o'clock.

    20. Is the hotel far from the center of London?
    No, It’s isn’t. about 10 minutes by car.

    21. Is it possible to do some shopping around the hotel?
    Yes, it is but it’s more interesting to go in the center of London.

    22. Can I dinner in the evening at the hotel on 9pm.
    Yes, you can but you have to pay because it’s not included in the form
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    23. Are there any good restaurants around the hotel?
    Yes, there are very good restaurants like Chinese restaurants, Italian or Greek restaurants.

    24. I intend to stay three nights, can you send the invoice to my boss company?
    Yes, I can. The total price of your reservation will be 486 euros.

    25. Thank you for your patience. I hope to have a nice stay.
    Don’t forget that here we don’t pay in euros but in sterling’s. Goodbye, Thank you.


    J'ai pas trop le temps de faire ca impecc (humhum ;) ) jai corrigé quelques fautes en laissant d'autres, n'hésitez pas à changer quelques trucs tout en restant à un niveau de 4eme
    ludt, 28 Novembre 2006
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    Kung JEDI

    Ah je viens de comprendre la , je pensais qui fallait traduire en français j'avais vraiment rien compris.
    Kung, 28 Novembre 2006
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    1. Hi, Am I well at the hotel American Express?
    Yes, You are madam, what can I do for you?

    2. Do you have a room with a bath or a shower?
    Yes, We Do. Do you want a room for particular or enterprise?

    3. Business, thank you.
    Could you spell the name of your company?

    4. S.O.F.T.W.A.R.E, do you want me to repeat?
    No, thank you madam but could you give me your first name too please? Thank you.

    5. Yes, naturally, Aurelie, I’m the secretary of Mister Armstrong.
    Thank you, Could you give me your date of birth?

    6. Yes, of course, it’s the twenty-third of January nineteen-eighty (1980)
    Where do you call from? International or local?

    7. I’m phoning from Belgium for the Software Company.
    Would you like a car at your disposal at the time of arrival?

    8. Yes, I'd like so. It'll be useful to me.
    I’m going to reserve a car that you can use at your arrival at the airport

    9. That would be great, thank you.
    When do you land at Heathrow?

    10. On Friday. 7 pm (or 7'o clock
    Ok, someone is going to wait next to your car to give you the keys.

    11. Do you have a conference room in the hotel?
    Yes, Sure, Will there be many people?

    12. Approximately two hundred persons are coming at the conference.
    When do you wish to have the conference room at your disposal?

    13. On Saturday if it is possible, thank you.
    Yes, it is free after ten’o clock in the morning.

    14. Ten o'clock, perfect.
    Is a breakfast necessary for the guests?

    15. Oh yes, if it’s possible
    Do you want an estimation for the room and breakfast?

    16. Yes, I do. My accountancy needs it.
    Ok, let's say two thousand five hundred and fourty pounds per person.



    17. When can I have my breakfast in my own room?
    Usually, not before 7 'o clock

    18. Is there something else to do in the hotel?
    Yes, we have a fitness centre, a beauty centre, a swimming pool and a bar.

    19. I usually get up at seven o’clock ; could you wake me up on that moment?
    Yes, no problem madam. Your phone is going to call at 7 'o clock

    20. Is the hotel far from London's centre?
    No, It isn’t. You need ten minutes by car to get there.

    21. Is it possible to buy something around the hotel?
    Yes, it is but it’s more interesting to go in the centre of London.

    22. Can I have dinner in the evening at the hotel on 9pm?
    Yes, you can but you'll have to pay because it’s not included in your journey here.

    23. Are there any good restaurants around the hotel?
    Yes, there are Chinese, Italian, greek restaurants. You just have to make a choice madam.
    24. I'll stay three nights in the hotel, could you send the invoice(gné squoi ça?) to my boss'company?
    No problem madam. That will be 486 euros.

    25. Thank you I hope to have a nice journey.
    Don't forget madam, here we use pound. Goodbye, Thank you.

    Tu réfléchis beaucoup trop en français, c'est rigolo. :p
    Moving, 28 Novembre 2006
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    ludt Hips hips hurra!

    ah je kiffe ton dialogue et tu as même nommer un aéroport et tout et tout, mais fais gaffe qu'il y a plusieurs aéroports à Londres, faut que ca tienne la route :D
    ludt, 28 Novembre 2006
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    Ludovic_ Anime > Manga

    Lol non pas traduire en francais, mais c'est super gentil de votre part !
    Coeur à tous :)
    Ludovic_, 28 Novembre 2006
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