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Elite
Bonjour, pour partir en séjour linguistique, je dois écrire une lettre de motivation, pourriez vous m'aider à l'améliorer/la corriger?
merci
Mrs Hanin,
I'm writing to you to demanstrate you my motivations for the trip to sweden.
Fisrt, I like pacticing english and I do it every time I can.
This trip is an oppurtinity to improve my English.
But it's not my only reason for going thre, I also want to meet other people from other cultures.
Additionally, I don't really know the scandinavian culture so it can be a good way to open my mind to this culture.
I hope I'll be chosen for the trip.
(formule de politesse)
Il me manque une formule de politesse pour terminer, auriez vous une idée?
merci
Mrs Hanin,
I'm writing to you to demanstrate you my motivations for the trip to sweden.
Fisrt, I like pacticing english and I do it every time I can.
This trip is an oppurtinity to improve my English.
But it's not my only reason for going thre, I also want to meet other people from other cultures.
Additionally, I don't really know the scandinavian culture so it can be a good way to open my mind to this culture.
I hope I'll be chosen for the trip.
(formule de politesse)
Il me manque une formule de politesse pour terminer, auriez vous une idée?