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Bonjour à tous,
J'aurais besoin de l'aide de personnes parlant (très) bien anglais pour corriger ma lettre de motivation.
Aussi, si d'autres personnes veulent la lire pour me donner leur avis dessus, ils sont les bienvenus!
voici la lettre:
C'est une page A4, pas très court je sais, merci à ceux qui prendront le temps de m'aider!
Bonne journée
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J'aurais besoin de l'aide de personnes parlant (très) bien anglais pour corriger ma lettre de motivation.
Aussi, si d'autres personnes veulent la lire pour me donner leur avis dessus, ils sont les bienvenus!
voici la lettre:
J'ai mis en couleure les points qui me semble "sonner faux"...Dear Madam,
With this letter, I would like to express my interest in studying at the INSEEC Business School of Bordeaux as an Erasmus student.
Having looked through the folder of the international department, I was delighted to find the opportunity to spend one semester learning marketing at a foreign high school. I have decided to apply for this program because I am sure it would strongly enrich my future studies and help me in my prospective career. Furthermore, I am very curious about different marketing approaches.
Moreover, I would love to be among international students, it would be a great chance to broaden my horizon and get in touch with people I would probably never have the chance to meet. Getting to know different cultures and habits as well as different opinions and tastes, corresponds strongly to my nature.
However my application has a weakness: my results. I have never got great grades in my theoretical exams. I have always been better for the practicals. Indeed, if you take a look at the results of my integrated exercise you will find out that we had the best results we were ranked as the best amongst the sophomores in marketing. The business school in Bordeaux combines knowledge acquisition with a genuine professionalization which is just what I’m looking for.
During my first two years at the IESN I have found out that I would like to specialize in management. The INSEEC business school focuses on this subject. Being able to spend a semester there would be a great opportunity for me to improve in this field. This would give me a chance to deepen my marketing knowledge and improve my English.
I am fairly tired of living in Namur. I have been studying in this city for more than ten years. I would really enjoy this experience in a new city. The population of Bordeaux exceeds 200,000 residents and the school gathers more than 20 nationalities, it would be a pleasant disorientation!
My second choice if I cannot get into the INSEEC Business School is katholieke hogeschool in Leuven. It is also a large school with many exchange students that could bring me disorientation. Moreover, in Leuven, I could improve my Dutch with native speakers.
Finally, I am confident that my experience in Bordeaux will prove invaluable for both my studies and overall personal development.
Thank you for considering my request. I’m looking forward to getting your answer.
Yours faithfully,
A B C D
C'est une page A4, pas très court je sais, merci à ceux qui prendront le temps de m'aider!
Bonne journée
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